Time for a new challenge, this one courtesy of prolific author/friend Vivian Kirkfield. This is the 5th year for #50 Precious Words. I thank Vivian, the judges, those who've donated prizes, and readers who leave comments. We writers appreciate these opportunities.
Guidelines are to write a story for kids 12 and younger, any topic, prose, poetry, any style, BUT 50 words. It's not easy to get a true story in such tight guidelines. However, the challenge is the fun.
A TALE SO TRUE
by Kathy Halsey
If I could call your name,
If I could make you real,
I'd reach across time to fetch you.
Oh, how I wish I could make this so true. Your rhyme and rhythm punch this heart-felt story with such warm emotion. Good luck Kathy <3
ReplyDeleteDear Charlotte, I know you know how this feels. Hugs.
DeleteSo touching!
ReplyDeleteTY, Beverly.
ReplyDeleteTy for reading. As soon as I can, I'll get by to read others. Just finished this today.
❤️❤️❤️ “I’d reach across time to fetch you.” That’s how it is, isn’t it? -Carrie
ReplyDeleteOh, yes, it is, isn't it, Carrie? Ty for commenting.
DeleteThis is so heartfelt, Kathy! I love it.
ReplyDeleteTy, Deborah. It has my feelings for my sis-in-law who I am losing to Alzheimer's at 64 also as an inspiration. Her mind an dour connection is not there anymore.
DeleteI love it!
ReplyDeleteHeart you.
DeleteOh, I love this, Kathy! And your explanation behind the heart of this story is so touching. Hugs to you and your sister-in-law.
ReplyDeleteAnd also your sweet pup, Iris. We never stop missing them. xo
DeleteYes, we loose so many memories wit thrones we love. Ty for understanding, Jilanne.
DeleteTouching and lovely. Wonderful, Kathy.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, David.
DeleteOh Kathy, I love this! It’s such a peek into your heart. Thank you for sharing it! ♥️
ReplyDeleteTy, Beth.
Deletevery sweet
ReplyDeleteThank you for stopping by, Dianne.
DeleteI have tears in my eyes! I'll be thinking of you & dear Iris as I walk my own two pups.
ReplyDeleteAww, bless you, Patricia. Enjoy those pups.
DeleteAwwww, that is SO sweet.
ReplyDeleteSweet a chocolate, right? LOL
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