Tuesday, March 3, 2020

A Tail So True - #50 Precious Words by Kathy Halsey

Time for a new challenge, this one courtesy of prolific author/friend Vivian Kirkfield. This is the 5th year for #50 Precious Words. I thank Vivian, the judges, those who've donated prizes, and readers who leave comments. We writers appreciate these opportunities. 

Guidelines are to write a story for kids 12 and younger, any topic, prose, poetry, any style, BUT 50 words. It's not easy to get a true story in such tight guidelines. However, the challenge is the fun.

My tale highlights my love of animals, dogs especially. This is Iris, our first Corgi, who we lost at 8 to Addison's and kidney failure. She was the inspiration for A TALE SO TRUE, a story with 47 words. Happy reading. As sweet Iris would say, "BAROOOO." 







A TALE SO TRUE 

by Kathy Halsey

If I could call your name,
If I could make you real,
I'd reach across time to fetch you.

You’d bounce and paw,
romp and roll.
You'd snuffle up treats.
We'd sit paw-in-hand.

Nuzzled up close.
wish it was true,
cozy hugs from
a tail so true.






23 comments:

  1. Oh, how I wish I could make this so true. Your rhyme and rhythm punch this heart-felt story with such warm emotion. Good luck Kathy <3

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    1. Dear Charlotte, I know you know how this feels. Hugs.

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  2. TY, Beverly.
    Ty for reading. As soon as I can, I'll get by to read others. Just finished this today.

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  3. ❤️❤️❤️ “I’d reach across time to fetch you.” That’s how it is, isn’t it? -Carrie

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    1. Oh, yes, it is, isn't it, Carrie? Ty for commenting.

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  4. This is so heartfelt, Kathy! I love it.

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    1. Ty, Deborah. It has my feelings for my sis-in-law who I am losing to Alzheimer's at 64 also as an inspiration. Her mind an dour connection is not there anymore.

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  5. Oh, I love this, Kathy! And your explanation behind the heart of this story is so touching. Hugs to you and your sister-in-law.

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    1. And also your sweet pup, Iris. We never stop missing them. xo

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    2. Yes, we loose so many memories wit thrones we love. Ty for understanding, Jilanne.

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  6. Touching and lovely. Wonderful, Kathy.

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  7. Oh Kathy, I love this! It’s such a peek into your heart. Thank you for sharing it! ♥️

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  8. I have tears in my eyes! I'll be thinking of you & dear Iris as I walk my own two pups.

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