Monday, October 27, 2014

Halloweensie 2014: Creak, C-R-E-A-K, Keep!

Bwaaaaaaa! It's time once again for a great contest! Thanks to Susanna Leonard Hill's generosity in creating these fun challenges and for all her writer friends who have donated great prizes! 

The rules?  We are to write a 100 word story appropriate for children using the words pumpkin, broomstick and creak, or a form of those words. It's not as easy as you think, my pretties.
My story? I was playing around with word families in an attempt to learn more re: early readers and chapter books. I decided to include a word family in my story, too, based off  the long "e" sound in creak. Amazingly, it sounded rather poetic, and that, my pretties, made me happy. So here it is. Let me know what you think...


Creak, C-R-E-A-K, Keep! by Kathy Halsey

Autumn jumped.
“C-r-e-a-k.”
Have I heard that sound before?
“C-r-e-a-k…”
Was it in the basement?
Was it outside in the pumpkin patch?

Autumn grabbed a broomstick propped by the screen door.
This MIGHT keep the scaries away.

Sweep, sweep.
“C-R-E-E-E-A-K!!!!”

Autumn dropped the broom.
Maybe a peek in the
deep
dark
basement?

Stairs were steep.
Autumn took two at a time.
She landed on cool cement.

Autumn inched over to a dank corner.
She reached something
soft and sleek.
Saw glowing eyes,
felt whiskered cheek.

Autumn hugged
something sweet.
A big black cat, I think I’ll keep!



Thursday, March 20, 2014

Fractured Fairy Tale Contest - The Twelve Dancing Walruses



This tale clocks in at 385 words w/out the title. Please note that a "let" ( In Sedna's poem, line 3 of the story) is the collective noun for a group of walruses. Please leave a comment & I promise to read your tale, too. Thanks & appreciation to Susanna Leonard Hill for hosting this contest.

The Twelve Dancing Walruses

     Every evening as the Northern Lights flashed, Sedna, the Sea Goddess, sang a sea shanty that only twelve walrus pups could hear.
     “My lovely let* of twelve,
     Come to me where I dwell.
     Dance with me under the sea.
     I’ll catch you in my spell.”      
    The twelve slipped into the sea and swam to a secret cove where Sedna held court until dawn.      Her song enraptured the calves. The sociable sea creatures flapped their flippers. They danced a jig. They jostled and jumped ‘til the wee hours.
     The next day the calves slumbered in the sun. Old Tooth snorted when he saw his pups still dozing  Hmm… they sleep too soundly as if they’ve been up all night.
     First Born felt his father’s gaze and barked. “Look lively, brothers, especially you, Little Bit. Father suspects.”  
     Sedna’s mesmerizing voice continued to compel the calves to dance. The pups waltzed. They wiggled and even did the wobble. Each night promised more fun than the last.
     However, Little Bit dragged his flippers as the twelve shimmied and swayed. He blubbered to First Born, “My flippers flop. I’m ready to drop.”   
   The next night as the Aurora Borealis danced its way into the sky, Little Bit waited. While his brothers and sisters snuck out, he floated over to Old Tooth, seeking out his father’s warmth. Old Tooth woke as Little Bit crawled closer.    
“Is that you, little one? Where are the others?”
     “My flippers aren’t dancing slippers, Father, but if I tell my brothers’ secret, they will tease me.”    
     “Son, I questioned why your brothers lay listless. I was once like First Born, but I have a plan. My brother Grimm entrusted me with a magical net before he died. Now we use it.”
     Under the Northern Lights Old Tooth and Little Bit paddled to Sedna’s cove. While the pups frolicked, an invisible net scooped up the let and pulled them home.
     The twelve brothers rose early the next morning, famished and forgetful. Old Tooth swam over to the twelve.
     “I am pleased, my pups. Tonight we feast on the shrimp, crab, and clams I caught with Brother Grimm’s net. We will dance by the light of the moon. I decree that First Born and Little Bit shall lead and I will call the tune.”

Sunday, February 2, 2014

February Goals for Writing

Scan of a Valentine greeting card dated 1909.
Scan of a Valentine greeting card dated 1909. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
Posting my goals for Feb. here publicly so I will make sure I "get 'er done!" 
1. Finish 2 crits for on line critique group
2. Send a pb out to review group,
3. Get back to my blog - not posted since Dec (Yikes) 
4. Revise & send pb ms to a blog contest Feb. 10 
5. Finish a bibliography doc for WOW NF FB group on Women Who Were First in Their Field (pb only) 
6.Study plotting of mentor pb bios 
7. Research for 2 NF pbs!
February needs to be longer!
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Wednesday, December 11, 2013

Katie's Christmas Teapot



Merry, merry one &all! Here's my entry to Susanna Hill's 3rd Annual Holiday Writing Contest. Check out her fab blog &read all the holiday tales! Mine is based on my favorite ornament which broke this year, my mom's hand painted glass teapot ornament. Though the teapot is now in shards,  the memory lives on in this tale.

Katie’s Christmas Teapot
      Christmas - more ho-hum than ho-ho! Katie thought. Last year Gramma and I had such fun!
      Cookie baking, present wrapping, story telling! Gramma rivaled Santa in those departments!
      But now? No Gramma to decorate ginger bread monsters with her! Katie chuckled remembering how the gingerbread overtook the oven. Gingerbread boys and girls the size of Abominable Snowmen marched onto the baking racks. Gramma and Katie decided to keep this special tradition every year.
      Now, no Gramma to wrap presents that gave tinsy hints at what lay inside. One Chrstimas Gramma wrapped a beautiful pearl in conch shell. Katie smiled at the memory as she stroked the pearl that dangled on a gold chain around her neck. It was special.
      Now? No Gramma to share the history of family ornaments that would grace the blue spruce tree in Katie’s family room.
     Today Katie waited impatiently as the family trimmed the tree. She wanted the SPECIAL ornaments, not those plastic ornaments from the discount store!
     I want the glass ornaments in the Shiny Brite boxes. They’re from Gramma’s tree! Katie almost screamed.
     Now, no Gramma. Gramma had died nearly two years ago.
    Christmas was not the same. How Katie wished for the gift of her Gramma!
    “Katie? Look at this.” Dad passed her an old gray box. He had ALMOST packed it away.   
     Katie examined it closely. A hand painted glass teapot peaked through the window-box opening. There on the box, written in a feathery manuscript, Katie read the words aloud, “Teapot. SPECIAL. My favorite one!”
     Gramma had given Katie one last gift…a Christmas teapot she would always treasure!
     


   
        
    
    

Monday, November 18, 2013

Down Girl & Sit - The Series

Down Girl & Sit is a fun beginning chapter series that peeks into the minds of two mischievous dog friends as they wonder about life in the neighborhood and how to get their maters' attention. In the book I read, Bad to the Bone, the dog capers include knocking their humans off painting ladders, grabbing the hamburger man's dinner and saving the neighborhood from cats, Here Kitty Kitty, and squirrels. The exasperated humans drag Down Girl & Sit to obedience school, but it clear to our clever canines, humans can just NOT be trained!
This is a good mentor text for writers to study POV, anthropomorphism, and a clever plot line.  Ba-roo!


Thursday, November 14, 2013

Skeleton Cat - in November

SKELETON OF A CAT.
No need to be afraid of Skeleton Cat by Kristyn Crow, illustrated by Dan Krall! I confuse to being a book hoarder at times, and with Skeleton Cat, I admit to hoarding him since early October. this cute rhyming picture book with plenty of onomatopoeia is just plain fun to read aloud and has a super rhythm! Plus this phat cat is ready to literally rock-n-roll as he auditions for the band as, what else? A drummer.
Lines like "He went: Rattle, rattle. Clink, clink. Rattle, rattle clink. Tip tap. Clickety-clack, ka-plink, ka-plink, ka-plink. He rocked and he rollicked and he clunked around, and the kids in a playground heard the rattlin' sound..." will have youngin's dancing  & a tapping. Great writer's mentor text for rhyme and rhythm! Gotta dance on over to the library & finally turn him in!
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Tuesday, November 5, 2013

Monsters and Dogs & Kittens, Oh, My!

Cover of "Katie Loves the Kittens"
Cover of Katie Loves the Kittens
My tail wags for these 2 books: The Monster Who Lost His Mean & Katie Loves the Kittens. I've shared these 2 books multiple times with my bookworm grandson Tobin. By multiple times, I mean so many times that I know the books by heart!
Katie Loves the Kittens by John Himmelman, published in 2008 by Henry Holt, is a deceptively simple, light-hearted look at Katie, an irrepressible dog who loves Sara Ann's new kittens soooo much, it gets her in constant trouble. The kittens fly and scramble as Katie's tail wags so hard a kitten is caught in the onslaught. Pencil & watercolor drawings bring out Katie's personality- you feel for the poor dog as she learns to be patient & finally, just finally, Katie calms down enough that the kittens curl around her as she sleeps. My grandson & I love to repeat Katie's signature bark, "Aroooooo," which is similar to my Corgi's bark, Ba-roooo. this tale bears up after repeated readings. Fun for all.

I found The Monster Who Lost His Meanwhile browsing for a not-so-scary story for my 2.5 year old. This picture book is perfect for Halloween and beyond. Written by Tiffany Strelizt Haber, illustrated by Kirstie Edmunds, this 2012 book published by Henry Holt is a clever tale of a monster who no longer has his "M," so now he's an "Onster." Without being didactic, readers learn about bullying, not fitting in, and how to recreate yourself by turning a liability into an asset. Monster makes new friends, helps with chores and even gets a surprise party all without his "M" or his old friends. Curriculum connections for educators include alphabet recognition, word play, connotation vs. denotation (what is a monster w/out his name?) and creating acrostics. I give this book an "M" for Marvelous!
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